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    Critique my Short Film

    Just finished making a short comedy 'Single Status', and would love some feedback.

    Johnny gets more than he bargained for when he drives his insensitive friend to break up with his long distance girlfriend who recently moved there to be closer to him.

    So what you think?

    [url]https://vimeo.com/36761996[/url]

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    Cool, I enjoyed it!

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    Guidos and McMansions, two of my favorite things. :O

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    Nice job. Good direction and camera work.
    Give yourself a nice pat on the back.

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    [QUOTE=acepepe;4371658]Cool, I enjoyed it![/QUOTE]

    You would

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    That was awesome, great job. The fight scene reminded me of scenes from Kill Bill.

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    [QUOTE=Bonhomme Richard;4371668]That was awesome, great job. The fight scene reminded me of scenes from Kill Bill.[/QUOTE]

    Yeah, that was the first thing I thought...Tarantino...

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    That movie is wack yo! you gott a killa elite girlfriend. who wants an abusive GF. she should be crying instad of tryin to kill somebody with a baseball bat.

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    Pretty cool man. Nice jiu jitsu by the girl.

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    [QUOTE=One Eye;4371655]Just finished making a short comedy 'Single Status', and would love some feedback.

    Johnny gets more than he bargained for when he drives his insensitive friend to break up with his long distance girlfriend who recently moved there to be closer to him.

    So what you think?

    [url]https://vimeo.com/36761996[/url][/QUOTE]

    My buddy is a 3rd year agent at an agency and he represents guys like Kevin Heart and ill pass it along see what he thinks...

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    Nice job!

    "I'm not missing Cake Boss" was priceless!!!:D

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    [QUOTE=thebigragu;4371665]You would[/QUOTE]

    Wear out your prison sex by tool CD? kinda tough to reminisce about the good old days without it? try kicking the soap around a bit, I'm sure it will bring you back.

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    Call me a cane-shaker, but havent Jersey young adults been dealt enough of a bad hand with this psuedo-rap violent wannabee gangsta cretinism already?

    I dindt see one Museum in that whole play.

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    [QUOTE=32green;4371935] havent Jersey young adults been dealt enough of a bad hand with this psuedo-rap violent wannabee gangsta cretinism already?[/QUOTE]

    No. They deserve more. Call it payback for Kevin Smith.

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    [QUOTE=BigJet85;4371692]My buddy is a 3rd year agent at an agency and he represents guys like Kevin Heart and ill pass it along see what he thinks...[/QUOTE]

    Thanks man!

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    Good stuff! One criticism - and I'd be surprised if this hasn't been called to your attention before - the boom and audio guy are visible in the rear view mirror in a few shots. Sorry! :O

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    LOL. That sh!t was funny. Love the Cake Boss stuff.

    Music during the credits is too loud.

    But the film itself was really nicely done. I don't know the first thing about film production, but I didn't see anything I didnt like.

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    Not bad at all. "Cake Boss" line was great even though I was expecting it from reading this thread. Staple gun was a great touch! The acting was ok.

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    [QUOTE=Jets Things;4437148]Good stuff! One criticism - and I'd be surprised if this hasn't been called to your attention before - the boom and audio guy are visible in the rear view mirror in a few shots. Sorry! :O[/QUOTE]

    ..and you could really tell it was a plastic bat...authenticity counts yo....

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    [QUOTE=32green;4371935]Call me a cane-shaker, but havent Jersey young adults been dealt enough of a bad hand with this psuedo-rap violent wannabee gangsta cretinism already?



    -[/QUOTE]

    oh but you have no problem making fun of rural people or those with short/long
    limbs. get off your soapbox you Trans-Am driving bargain basement joey Buttafucco.

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